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The ordinary bad guy with black wings, red hair and a mask.
Something couldn't miss in a respectable gallery...

This is a dark solar, a greater aasimon angel that has lost his grace.

In this pic is not visible, but his mask has five eye (a common thing in mangas, but I like it so much...).
His right arm has been cut in a battle, so now he has got a mechanical one. His left hand (and maybe his face) shows his inner depravation.
Anyway, I like this pic, but I have the sensation that there is something wrong, so, please, comment it and give me advises so that I can make this drawing a better one....

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:icondaeliel:
it's a great pic, i like the pose, if i'd change anything it'd be this other "depraved" arm - i'd make it stronger and more sinister..i'd also add more darkness to the character, since for a viewer it'll be hard to draw the conclusion of his bipolarity without at least one more "dark" item. I hope i didn't confuse you..much :)

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:iconthefaefae:
I rather like it. Excellent personality. :)
:iconj0hn-uskgla55:
Beautiful pose and great attention to details. I, however, like the withered right hand (I really do)

And if you want to make it more malevolent and sinister - you can just work on his clothing and gears. Use a darker colour scheme and you're all the way there...

Excellent work

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:iconsweethitch-hiker:
A very nice drawing. The withered hand is fine and I think it actually makes the character a lot darker.

I definately agree with some of the other posters that some of the clothing should be darker, something similar to the tattered cloth hanging from the waist. Or maybe just the patterns at the end of the sleeve could be darker from the rest.

Also, maybe the mask could be shaded darker than the hair, just to give it a little more contrast.

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Darker clothing? Well it's an idea. I could try different colors, and if I'll give him dark red hair it will seems even more evil.
Thanks for the advice!
:iconhamann666:
Awesome job on the wings, and the falling feathers wonderful.

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January 11, 2007
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